Thank you, Maryellen! I knew this one was going to be tough for people to read, just given the subject matter, but I’m really proud of how it turned out.
Interesting fact: Windsor Technology is a company from my upcoming novel, so this story is sort of set outside of that, but in the same world.
Creepy and cool well done
Thank you! I was really happy with how it turned out.
This is a stunning story. The characters are great. I liked the unopened mail part. Everything flowed so well.
Thank you! I’m really glad to hear that. It was a challenge to squeeze everything into a flash fiction, so I’m really glad it still flows well. 😁
You're welcome.
Oh my gosh, this was so real it hurts. Fantastic characters!
Thank you, Maryellen! I knew this one was going to be tough for people to read, just given the subject matter, but I’m really proud of how it turned out.
Interesting fact: Windsor Technology is a company from my upcoming novel, so this story is sort of set outside of that, but in the same world.
Oh I love this, world building wondsrful!!!
You should be proud, this is phenomenal. The characters step off the page in this one.
I loooove this. It reminds me of that mothered game that we played. Awesome work!
Haha, I was hoping you would say that! I thought the same thing while I was working on it.
Captivating story! I love the line "I keep thinking that if I look away, she’ll just be gone again." I would think that too.
Thank you, Chris! Yeah, I wanted to really drive home the surreal nature of the experience for the father. So glad you liked it!
Bradley! So charming… and yet, so sinister. A true paradox. 😈🤍🔥