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Mina Howell's avatar

This is so incredibly powerful - I have chills!

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BJ Dawson's avatar

Hell yeah. Tell 'em why you're mad, Bradley. I co-sign one-hundred percent.

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Thank you, BJ! I’m really proud of this piece, and I’m glad to hear you agree with the message here.

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Vince Roman's avatar

So beautiful

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

I really enjoyed writing this one. Thanks for checking it out! 😁

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Michelle Ray's avatar

“But creativity should be human from the start.

Born after an idea and inspiration collide,

Not from something that has neither lived nor died.” The rhyming and pace work together to amplify the anger.

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Hazel's avatar

I see what you did with this poem, and I love the emotion you poured into it. Feels incredibly human, if you catch my drift.

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wild honeysuckle's avatar

"You seem to think that making art is easy,

That showing my soul doesn’t make me queasy.

That a semblance of technique and pace,

Can transport people to another place." Oh oh oh, this was so good

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