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Brenda - A Voice that Wonders's avatar

Loved this.. ❤️

Eugenia P. Frankenberg 🥀's avatar

I love this story so much. It reminds me that no matter how vast our universe is, our worlds are still other people and the love we have for them. Beautiful story.

Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Thank you so much, Eugenia! I love that takeaway. Really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment, my friend. 😁🙏

Wild K. Nebula's avatar

Ooooh hohoho!!!!!!!! 🤩 OooooOooo. This. Gave. Me. Chills! CHILLS BRADLEY! AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!

The internal dialogue, the dialogue between characters, the twists, the turns, beautifully devastating.

Bradley Ramsey's avatar

I’m so glad you enjoyed it! Your prompts have been amazing so far, I’m really enjoying them. Seeing a review like this from one of my favorite writers has made my week. 😁🙏

Matthew Holvey's avatar

Well done stuff.

lokikone's avatar

So good.

Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Thank you so much for reading, my friend!

williamphaynes/elliott's avatar

That was very clever

Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Thank you! Always appreciate your support, my friend.

Gregory Blair's avatar

Oh, I just loved this!