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Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

You are world building!!!! Nicely done.... 🙌

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

I learn from the best! 😉

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Mina Howell's avatar

Whoa! This was so cool!!

This is amazing work!

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Thanks Mina! I was really excited when I realized I could do something interesting with this prompt in my horror universe. I feel like it adds to the lore nicely!

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Mina Howell's avatar

It really does! I want to read more! Lol

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Scott Collins333's avatar

Cool 😎 I'm hoping there may be more? That's a helluva cliff hanger!

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Haha, yeah, I like my cliffhangers, that's for sure. I'll probably return to this concept again, but one thing I will say is that this story is set in my larger connected horror multiverse. If you check my pinned post under the "Synaptic Sprawl" section, you'll find this story and the others I've done set in this universe.

Characters like the two agents (Durwood especially), and other Wardens will show up in those other stories so you can piece together the larger narrative. The same goes for "Zariel." In fact, check out "The Forbidden Resurrection," as you'll find some big connections between this one and that one, but all those Sprawl stories are connected.

Thanks for checking this one out!

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M.E. Bartosiewicz's avatar

I finally found some real fiction! Hooray!

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Hey Matt, glad to have you here! Plenty of fiction to be found on my publication, and if you checked my pinned post on the home page, you’ll find links organized by the type of content and whether it’s set in one of my connected universes!

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