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Maryellen Brady πŸ’—πŸ“š's avatar

The audio to this.....omg omg omg omg!!!! 4th wall 😱😱😱😱😱🀯

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Haha, thank you so much, Maryellen! I’m really glad you’re enjoying that aspect of the series. As always I’m trying to experiment with interesting elements like that. 😁

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Brian Lilly's avatar

Bizarre! Fantastic! Brain busting! Where will the madness end!

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Haha, thank you, Brian! Those are precisely the things I’m going for. Stay tuned for part 3, there’s still plenty of twists and turns left in this story. πŸ‘€

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Mina Howell's avatar

Oh my goodness!

I absolutely love the audio in this, it adds to the feeling that even those reading are unable to escape 😳

This was seriously fantastic, I can't wait for the next part!

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Thanks, Mina, I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Yeah, given that this connects to my Crush Depth series, I wanted to pull in that ending where the reader was trapped. We of course now know them as Subject Zero, but the 4th wall break was 100% the goal here, haha.

Thanks again for the awesome feedback!

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Mina Howell's avatar

You definitely achieved it! I have to go walk around now πŸ˜‚

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Chad R Herman's avatar

Great story

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Thanks Chad! Really appreciate you checking it out.

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