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Oh my gosh!! It's like that conversation! Haha

I love it! I chose b and it felt right, though it hurt my heart.

Went back and read a and I'm glad I chose the way I did 😂

Amazing job! And I love that they're park rangers too lol

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Haha, you got it! I originally had a similar idea after going on a hike and getting a little lost a while back, but I never wrote the story. After talking to you and seeing the prompt, I knew it was time to write this piece!

So glad you enjoyed it, and yeah, I think ending B is the better choice.

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Also, that bumper sticker cracked me up because I literally say that to myself every time someone is too close to my car 😂😂

I'm so glad you wrote this! It's one of my new favorites!

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I've always loved the theory of parallel universe, not gonna lie, did think of this as another option for your prompt but I just know I don't have the mind to do it justice. And this was done beautifully. What a mind.

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Thank you! That's such amazing feedback. You should try a parallel universe story at some point! Your horror story from the other day almost felt like that (but they were twins instead), so I know you could do it justice!

My horror mythos where several of my stories take place is a "multiverse" so I've practiced this concept a lot, but I think it makes for really cool stories! Thanks, as always, for the support!

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Love this pays

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Thanks Vince! Glad you enjoyed it! 😁

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Choose your own adventure is soooo cool!

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