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Punam Majhi's avatar

Beautiful prose. Loved the ending ❤️❤️❤️

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M'Kala Hazzard's avatar

absolutely beautiful!

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Thank you for checking it out, M'Kala! I was really happy with this one, and I'm overjoyed to see the response!

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Ruth Rostrup's avatar

🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

The best kind of comment! Thank you, Ruth!

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Isabella Nesheiwat's avatar

I absolutely loved this, Bradley! The way you were able to capture a love that is not meant to be by pairing it with a world actively experiencing destruction is masterful. Brilliant, I say!!

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Thank you! It was such a simple idea when it came to me, but I focused on making all the words count to create a beautiful and tragic piece. So glad you enjoyed it!

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Isabella Nesheiwat's avatar

the precise word choice really came through!!

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Devo/Murphy Carpenter's avatar

This is fantastic and I added the artist to my Spotify great addition

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

I'm so glad you liked it! That song is one of my favorites. Very peaceful, but catchy music.

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Kathy Gerstorff's avatar

Beautiful poem, Bradley. I love when poems are paired with music. It takes it to the next level. 💕

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

I completely agree! So glad you enjoyed it.

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CREATIVE_ESCAPE's avatar

That is beautiful

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Thank you! I really enjoyed writing this piece.

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