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Annieguile Bentulan's avatar

I honestly smiled reading this, your cleverness as a writer really shines here. The way you wove in deep concepts and still made it a poetic banger? Hands down, always. You never miss.

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Thank you so much, Annieguile! Your feedback always makes me smile as well. I really enjoy prompts like this that ask me to find the deeper message in the ordinary. It's my favorite kind of poetry to read as well.

I really appreciate you checking it out and sharing your thoughts, as always. Your comments always make my day. 😁

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V. Walker | Poet's avatar

why am I not suprised wikipedia gave you something cosmic related lol

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Haha, I didn't think about that, but you're absolutely right.

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V. Walker | Poet's avatar

I usually am....

;D

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