This is so incredibly well-done. I am a sucker for a good description of eyes, and you do such a good job at describing the man's eyes here. For such a short piece, the way you were able to allude to a world larger than the one within the story is so perfectly done. And the song choice is perfect; even the visuals match with the man's eyes. Absolutely stunning piece!!!
Thanks for checking it out, Vanessa! This is a new type of story for me, but I'm glad you enjoyed it! Great point about Danielle, I'll have to think on that one, see if a sequel is in the cards, haha.
I love this story. What a great piece
Thank you, Chad! So happy to hear you enjoyed it. It’s one of my favorites as well.
This is so incredibly well-done. I am a sucker for a good description of eyes, and you do such a good job at describing the man's eyes here. For such a short piece, the way you were able to allude to a world larger than the one within the story is so perfectly done. And the song choice is perfect; even the visuals match with the man's eyes. Absolutely stunning piece!!!
Thank you! When I first got the idea for the story, I pictured those eyes so vividly in my head, I knew that had to be a focal point.
So glad you enjoyed the song as well! I
Amazing visual: eyes, like two kaleidoscopes tumbling knowledge reserved only for gods.
Love the story. Now we need to know what happened with Danielle 🤩
Thanks for checking it out, Vanessa! This is a new type of story for me, but I'm glad you enjoyed it! Great point about Danielle, I'll have to think on that one, see if a sequel is in the cards, haha.
very cool piece.
Thanks Hanna, I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
Wonderfully crafted story. I especially enjoyed the musical chaser. Perfect pairing!
Hi Rebecca, thank you so much for checking it out! I like the term "musical chaser" a lot, haha!
The descriptions, his eyes & smile, so poetic & lyrical. Great piece.
Thank you for checking it out Maryellen! I’m glad you enjoyed it. 😁
I adore this story 💖 a leap of faith 🫶
Thank you! This one is simple, but effective. I’m glad you enjoyed it!