I chose the second one and I'm literally about to cry, it was so beautiful and peaceful, a truly calm ending in the midst of a storm of chaos. I'm about to go read the first one now, but I loved this!
Ahhhh they were both heartfelt. I love that. I also noticed the tone shift between the two stories as well. A was gritty and dark but shifted after a struggle for life. While the heartfelt tone was very warm in B. If that makes sense! With that being said I think I liked B more. Just for the simple fact that it’s so wholesome. Amazing as always.
Your analysis is spot-on as always! Yeah, despite the darker path, I wanted the key takeaway to be that they always cross paths in every universe.
Fun fact, the “third” universe where the asteroid gets destroyed is the setting of my upcoming cosmic horror novel. Bennu is the name of the asteroid in that book as well. 👀
Yesss, thank you! I’m glad my insights aren’t too jumbled. And when Benuu is said like THAT, is when it gets a little CREEPY. Looking so forward to it.
YES, wanted the love story and I got it. Even if it was hella sad. I feel you let the reader fill in the details with their life and that was amazing. My mind wandered about the love birds and it makes you BUILD a connection on top of the tight dialogue. Time for the horror one
Haha, there's no "right or wrong path" for this story. The ending is the same regardless, which was the experiment here. Universe A is my preference as well, but I love to see which options people pick!
I chose the second one and I'm literally about to cry, it was so beautiful and peaceful, a truly calm ending in the midst of a storm of chaos. I'm about to go read the first one now, but I loved this!
I missed the CYOA and this one was so powerful!
Ahhhh they were both heartfelt. I love that. I also noticed the tone shift between the two stories as well. A was gritty and dark but shifted after a struggle for life. While the heartfelt tone was very warm in B. If that makes sense! With that being said I think I liked B more. Just for the simple fact that it’s so wholesome. Amazing as always.
Your analysis is spot-on as always! Yeah, despite the darker path, I wanted the key takeaway to be that they always cross paths in every universe.
Fun fact, the “third” universe where the asteroid gets destroyed is the setting of my upcoming cosmic horror novel. Bennu is the name of the asteroid in that book as well. 👀
Yesss, thank you! I’m glad my insights aren’t too jumbled. And when Benuu is said like THAT, is when it gets a little CREEPY. Looking so forward to it.
YES, wanted the love story and I got it. Even if it was hella sad. I feel you let the reader fill in the details with their life and that was amazing. My mind wandered about the love birds and it makes you BUILD a connection on top of the tight dialogue. Time for the horror one
I can't make up my mind.
Haha, the choice is meant to make you think for sure. That being said, I think I prefer Universe A myself, though the ending is the same regardless. 🙏
Idk which was better. But the end!! What an ending!! This is amazing! 👏👏👏
Thank you so much, Rachel! I wanted the takeaway here to be that, in every universe, they find each other.
I love it! Was such a fun read!
Dunno if I did it correctly but UNIVERSE A ALL THE WAY!
Haha, there's no "right or wrong path" for this story. The ending is the same regardless, which was the experiment here. Universe A is my preference as well, but I love to see which options people pick!
My -totally- unbiased opinion is that this is awesome. 🥹
Haha, unbiased or not, I still appreciate you checking it out! 🥰