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Ellen Y. Mueller's avatar

Great story!

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Karen Novak's avatar

I loved the structure, and you rendered the imagery with a truly vivid but restrained touch. The hero/victim push and pull is the real hook for me here for me. This is a new genre for me, so I don’t feel confident enough to comment much beyond the fact I really enjoyed the read. Hoping to read more soon.

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