I loved the structure, and you rendered the imagery with a truly vivid but restrained touch. The hero/victim push and pull is the real hook for me here for me. This is a new genre for me, so I don’t feel confident enough to comment much beyond the fact I really enjoyed the read. Hoping to read more soon.
Hey Karen, thank you so much for checking it out! I'm so happy that you enjoyed it, especially as someone who doesn't read a lot of horror. Very happy to have you here! My stories and poetry move between horror, sci-fi, and fantasy, so I'd like to think there's something for everyone. Appreciate you!
Absolutely amazing! I am blown away. The audio added such a unique aspect to this, that really elevated the piece, and the medical aspect of the horror was so unique and unexpected and so well-done! Another banger.....another banger from Bradley from The Writers Journey!
Yes! I'm so glad you liked the audio. It's been a while since I've done a whole audio narration, so I was rusty! I love that slogan, "Another banger from Bradley," haha.
Well, in that case, stay tuned, because we're just getting started.
Thank you! I remember when I got the idea I sort of copy/pasted the beginning and made minor changes to drive home that Deja Vu feeling. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Great story!
Thank you, Ellen! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
I loved the structure, and you rendered the imagery with a truly vivid but restrained touch. The hero/victim push and pull is the real hook for me here for me. This is a new genre for me, so I don’t feel confident enough to comment much beyond the fact I really enjoyed the read. Hoping to read more soon.
Hey Karen, thank you so much for checking it out! I'm so happy that you enjoyed it, especially as someone who doesn't read a lot of horror. Very happy to have you here! My stories and poetry move between horror, sci-fi, and fantasy, so I'd like to think there's something for everyone. Appreciate you!
Absolutely amazing! I am blown away. The audio added such a unique aspect to this, that really elevated the piece, and the medical aspect of the horror was so unique and unexpected and so well-done! Another banger.....another banger from Bradley from The Writers Journey!
Yes! I'm so glad you liked the audio. It's been a while since I've done a whole audio narration, so I was rusty! I love that slogan, "Another banger from Bradley," haha.
Well, in that case, stay tuned, because we're just getting started.
Just slow down your reading 😀 40 years of theatre training that is my biggest foe too
Great feedback, thank you! Yeah, I tend to rush in the action scenes in particular. Thank you for checking it out!
the rust did not peek through! and i cannot wait to hear and read more from you!!!
Dang dude! This was a super thrilling read. Loved the concept and your execution was great! The repetition towards the end was a nice touch.
Thank you! I remember when I got the idea I sort of copy/pasted the beginning and made minor changes to drive home that Deja Vu feeling. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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So good you need to submit this