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Anelya's avatar

Loved this and loved the twist. Also I know that it's implied that they're not from Earth (or is it implied? it doesn't say anything about their origin directly), so I would love to think that it's a time loop. They had a chance to change the story, create a new one, but instead they opted out for the old narrative.

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Oooh, I love that theory! I left it open to interpretation as to where they came from, so this concept works! I love time loops, one of my favorite games ever is Outer Wilds which uses a time loop as well.

Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts! This is my head canon now, haha.

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Anelya's avatar

This story also reminded me of this account on IG https://www.instagram.com/badspacecomics/

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Oh wow, those comics look incredible! Thanks for the recommendation, I just followed them.

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Ashtyn Faye's avatar

I’m obsessed with this concept of Eden being a completely different world and Adam and Eve ending up on Earth the way they did through mishaps. Very creative!

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Thanks Ashytn! This was originally just a piece about them getting separated, but when I got the idea to give it a biblical spin, I figured why not? I like to experiment with crazy ideas in my stories.

Appreciate you reading it!

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Alexander Blaine's avatar

Awesome story! Thanks for sharing.

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Odessa Blaine's avatar

Interesting take on the Genesis story. I like it.

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Thanks for checking it out, Odessa! Always trying to experiment with new concepts and themes. Glad you enjoyed it! ☺️

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