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Yes! I managed to get an ending where they both survive. Managed not to screw it up. This was great and I honestly would love to see more in this world you’ve crafted. I really enjoyed the dialogue and even had a good laugh from a couple of lines. Excellent work here and I’m eager to read more.

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Haha, congrats on getting the best ending! My other story "The Highway at the End of the World" is a choose your own adventure, too, in case you haven't read it.

More than a few people have said they want to see more of this world. I'm a man of the people, so stay tuned!

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I finished reading all chapters in one sitting. I chose to cut the wire and run but I went back and read the other endings as well. This was a great piece and I absolutely love the choice of endings. You have a talent for writing apocalyptic stories. I can’t wait to read more of your work. I’m so glad we connected on here.

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Wow, I’m so glad you enjoyed it! I was actually brainstorming a new story after your comments regarding my Widowmaker piece.

My upcoming novel is sort of end of days and goes into post apocalyptic as the series continues, so I’m glad to hear that my stories in that genre are compelling! Thank you again for the support, and stay tuned for more very soon!

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I just finished reading this last chapter and thoroughly enjoyed it! I chose to refuse ascension and cut the red wire, so you know what happened to me. But I went back and read all the other endings, of course, and I love the last sentence of the ending for those who chose Ascension. Great job!

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So glad you enjoyed it! Yeah that first ending was a bit of a bummer I imagine, haha. Glad you saw (and enjoyed) the other endings!

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Just read the entire thing in one sitting and I'm obsessed!

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Wow! I don't think anyone's done that, to my knowledge. Thank you so much, Mina! This series may be done, but rest assured, I have plenty more stories to tell.

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Yay! I can't wait to read them!

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before reading: 👹yessss it’s here👹

after reading: 👹yess that was so good👹

i read every ending and i loved them all!! this project was incredible Bradley, im so thankful to have found your content here! i can’t wait to see what you give us later 💚🫡

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Thank you so much, Isabella, I appreciate this feedback more than you know. ❤️

Stay tuned, plenty more stories (and series) coming soon!

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