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J.M Gokey's avatar

I’ll save the finale for tomorrow, but this has been a fantastic read. Thanks so much for sharing

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

So happy to hear you're enjoying it! Looking forward to your thoughts on the conclusion (and its multiple endings)!

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Isabella Nesheiwat's avatar

you always know just the right moments to break, which is something i have never been good at so major major props there!!

i am so involved in this! the end is probably gonna rip my heart out! i’m so excited!

also this: “I could see the scars that time and trauma had left behind, but I didn’t see flaws. Instead, I saw triumphs. Signs that she had lived.

Not only lived. She thrived, in spite of all that adversity.” is diabolical 😭😭

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Haha, I’m really glad that line stood out to you. I wanted Summer to feel very human, but I also wanted her to be a badass. Since we don’t meet her until chapter four, I had to find ways to show she’s been through a lot and emerged stronger for it.

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Stephanie Church's avatar

Love this one too. You’re keeping me hanging!

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Thank you for checking out the new chapter, Stephanie! Tomorrow is the big finale, and in that one I'll be asking you to make decisions that will lead to one of four possible endings. Get ready, I can't wait to hear what you think!

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