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Mina Howell's avatar

Whoa this is awesome! I like this one a lot!

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Thanks Mina! I love doing cosmic horror like this. 😁

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D Wade Millet's avatar

I liked this one Bradley. Reminded me of a story about planet that only seen stars every 1,000 years. It drove the planet Mad every 1,000 years

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Thank you! That other story sounds really cool!

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Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

You had to pick the color of my hair?!?! Omg this has creepy factor 12 to it. So good.

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Haha, to be fair, I wrote this story a few years go with a prompt to use Very Peri. This was actually for my first Flash Fiction February I'd ever done!

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Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

It is so creepy. Is this your preferred genre? Cause....you have got it down!

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Oh yeah, this is my favorite genre to write!

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Vince Roman's avatar

Loved this one

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Thank you! I had a lot of fun with this piece.

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Isabella Nesheiwat's avatar

holy crap dude, this was awesome! as someone with synesthesia, i love the way you described color in this. another stunning story!

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Thanks, Isabella! Yeah, this story was actually from a flash fiction challenge, funny enough. The prompt was to use the color "Very Peri," and my cosmic horror brain came up with this, haha.

Glad you enjoyed it!

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