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Edward.Marlo.Ruiz's avatar

Amazingly done with the two perspectives! I actually did really enjoy this one more but either way they’re great. Always killing it with the sci fi ideas and the pacing. It all plays out so smoothly.

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Thank you! Yeah, I decided to let myself have a higher word count in Side B (Side A was microfiction for Mina’s prompt), and the extra space made it easier to go more in depth with the second part.

Really glad you liked it! I love when new experimental ideas like this connect with readers and fellow writers. 😁

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Kristin Rosenbach's avatar

Loved this series! Especially Side B.

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Mina Howell's avatar

WOW I WOULD LOVE A SERIES OF THIS!!

This is absolutely amazing! I am so jazzed that this prompt helped create this amazing world!

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Devo/Murphy Carpenter's avatar

And….

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Devo/Murphy Carpenter's avatar

Do it busy man

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Haha, I feel like this idea has potential! Would love to do a series or a larger story in this universe at some point.

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