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Edward.Marlo.Ruiz's avatar

I absolutely love this character. I feel this is my first exposure to his darker side and it’s so well written. He means business and I can’t wait for more.

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Haha, thank you! Yes, Finton is soon going to reveal his hand as we prepare for my series set in D'veen. Stay tuned!

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Edward.Marlo.Ruiz's avatar

Even how casual he is about it, or how casual this seems to the world of D’Veen is such solid shadowed world building.

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Mina Howell's avatar

Dang Merrybrooke! I didn't know you had that in you! Not a very merry brooke at all 😂😂

I love this story and the voices were on point!

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Haha, Finton certainly has a dark side that we will see more of in the coming weeks. Glad you enjoyed the story and my ridiculous, haha!

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Mina Howell's avatar

I like that he has such range! He's a great character haha

I forgot what else I was going to say but I'll probably remember it after I send this 😅

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Tamsin Gordon's avatar

😂 lol note to self, don't lecture merrybrooke on story telling.

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Frank Favasuli's avatar

This was awesome. If you’re interested, check out my publication “Pirate Legends” for Pirate history and other stories 🏴‍☠️🏴‍☠️🏴‍☠️

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Thanks Frank! I plan to do more stories with that Jameson character mentioned in this piece, so I'll check out your work for inspiration!

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Frank Favasuli's avatar

I appreciate it, Bradley. I actually have a character in mine with the last name Jamieson! Love it! Looking forward to more.

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Isabella Nesheiwat's avatar

Brilliant, dude! I love this dark side to Finton. He has so many layers.....like an onion....or an ogre.

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Hahaha, Shrek himself would be proud of this reference. Thank you for checking it out!

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