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Mina Howell's avatar

Oh my GOSH I can't believe that I missed this story!

I absolutely love how well the twists are done, this story gave me anxiety and confused me so much, but all of my questions were answered in the end! I love it!

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Haha, thanks Mina! This was a very early story of mine, but when I first wrote it, I got feedback on how the twists were a little confusing (even by the end), so I reworked it for this Substack version.

Glad to hear it’s all making sense now (as crazy as it is, haha). Thanks again for checking it out!

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Odessa Blaine's avatar

Nicely timed twists. Could see this being a full length novel.

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Thank you so much, Odessa! This is an older one of mine that I revamped for Substack, but it’s one of my favorites.

The original version had some pacing issues, so I’m happy to hear this one got the timing right! Hoping to have a similar feel in my upcoming cosmic horror novel as well. 😁

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