Haha, I’m glad you liked it! This first part was the only story in this universe for the longest time, and I just loved the concept, so I came back later to write parts two and three.
Damn!!!!! i love the how you ended this part one.. I never did get the chance to read and listen to this when you posted it but liked it as I got excited...and now I’m glad I came back to it. the ending was very ominous and immersive it did feel like I was watching the news...heading to the chapter 2.... 👏👏👏👏
Haha, I was very excited to hear your thoughts on this one! When I first wrote it, I had been given the prompt “Storm” and I immediately thought about what would happen if I did some sort of cosmic/supernatural storm?
Love storm stories! I'm strapped in for this storm. Love listening to the audio! I wonder how the storm sounds like. Perhaps a mix of screeching high winds and guttural alien sounds?
Thanks Chris! And yes, your audio descriptions are exactly right! Part two will offer a bit more detail on how sound plays a role in both the storm, and a way to protect yourself from it.
Really glad you’re enjoying it so far! I had a lot of fun writing this one. 😁
Well, this is comforting news....new rooms & new hallways. I'm definitely not going to be attracted to that....yes, yes, I would be the one wondering down that hallway. I'm so toast in your story world. TOAST!
The description of the storm and its impact was perfectly done. Definitely something more to this one as always 👁️👁️
Haha, I’m glad you liked it! This first part was the only story in this universe for the longest time, and I just loved the concept, so I came back later to write parts two and three.
Damn!!!!! i love the how you ended this part one.. I never did get the chance to read and listen to this when you posted it but liked it as I got excited...and now I’m glad I came back to it. the ending was very ominous and immersive it did feel like I was watching the news...heading to the chapter 2.... 👏👏👏👏
Haha, I was very excited to hear your thoughts on this one! When I first wrote it, I had been given the prompt “Storm” and I immediately thought about what would happen if I did some sort of cosmic/supernatural storm?
Checking out your comments on Parts 2 and 3 next!
this is so exciting, i love it
Thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed it; parts two and three are also out now!
ill savour them for each day — i need something after my CAD assignments to keep me sane
Finally catching up and I'm hooked!
The extra halls in the houses reminds me of house of leaves! 🥰
Thanks, Mina! The House of Leaves comparison is really good, I didn’t think of that!
That book lives rent free in my mind lol
It's a great little addition to the story!
That is one fucked up storm lol
Haha, that is 100% correct. Part two will be out later today, showcasing the storm from a new perspective!
can't wait
Love storm stories! I'm strapped in for this storm. Love listening to the audio! I wonder how the storm sounds like. Perhaps a mix of screeching high winds and guttural alien sounds?
Thanks Chris! And yes, your audio descriptions are exactly right! Part two will offer a bit more detail on how sound plays a role in both the storm, and a way to protect yourself from it.
Really glad you’re enjoying it so far! I had a lot of fun writing this one. 😁
Well, this is comforting news....new rooms & new hallways. I'm definitely not going to be attracted to that....yes, yes, I would be the one wondering down that hallway. I'm so toast in your story world. TOAST!
Haha, I mean, I feel like my curiosity would get the best of me too if we're being honest. 😂
Right?! Too intriguing not to investigate.