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Edward.Marlo.Ruiz's avatar

A perfect blend of the unknown. Didn’t do the voice over for this one as that’s just my reading preference but your effort in these stories is so telling in itself. Worldbuilding is top notch and the ending is impactful. I was actually shocked to feel that he did it! At some point he’s doing this to himself. . . Maybe.

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Annieguile Bentulan's avatar

DAMN! What is in the vault!? This is bad—I have too many stories to follow, and now I have this one too! How am I supposed to divide my time!? I loved how you gave so much weight to Pavel's decision to pull the trigger; the hesitation was so pronounced in its inevitability. AND I SUPER LOVE THE VOICEOVER AND SOUNDEFFECTS!!!! Ooooh, I LOVED THIS!

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