Absolutely and deathly well done. Love the twists that he was a robot! OF COURSE. I should’ve seen it coming with you! But your writing always pulls the rug out. I also listened to this one and boy your narration game is on point. Even your tone switches were perfect. I really loved this and your formatting seemed to do it all a lot of justice I think. 💭 Keep pushing dope shit!
Your comments tonight are making my week, haha. I'm so happy you enjoyed the finale, and that the twist was enjoyable. I was hoping it would make sense, given some of the hints I dropped in part two.
Also very happy to hear your liked the narration! I've been practicing with several of my stories lately, and learning how to incorporate music + sound effects for added immersion. Thanks again for the amazing support and feedback as always!
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 MAN you DELIVERED!!! I'M AT AWE!! I LOVED IT.. IT ALL FELT SO LIVED IN... THE CHARACTERS, NOAH AND PAVEL WERE SO ALIVE IN MY MIND. AND THANK YOU FOR DOING THE SOUND-OVER IT BROUGHT IT ALL TO LIFE!!!AND OOHH THE CRYING FOR PAVEL!! SUPERB ACTING!! IM AT AWE!!
Haha, this may very well be the best comment I've ever received. I am so, so, so glad you enjoyed it! I really felt like it was something special when I finished recording. I myself was tearing up by the end. 😅
Thank you so much! I’m really glad you enjoyed the finale and the narration! Yeah, with Noah I tried to leave a few hints in part two, but the first one that comes to mind is the part where he gets seasick and the captain says “I didn’t know you folks could get sick,” since the captain would have known he was a robot (Anduvian as Pavel calls him.)
Thank you again for the support and wonderful feedback as always!
Absolutely and deathly well done. Love the twists that he was a robot! OF COURSE. I should’ve seen it coming with you! But your writing always pulls the rug out. I also listened to this one and boy your narration game is on point. Even your tone switches were perfect. I really loved this and your formatting seemed to do it all a lot of justice I think. 💭 Keep pushing dope shit!
Your comments tonight are making my week, haha. I'm so happy you enjoyed the finale, and that the twist was enjoyable. I was hoping it would make sense, given some of the hints I dropped in part two.
Also very happy to hear your liked the narration! I've been practicing with several of my stories lately, and learning how to incorporate music + sound effects for added immersion. Thanks again for the amazing support and feedback as always!
Wonderfully sad story. You put me into the characters and pulled me onto the island. Excellent. Great narration as well! Bravo!
Thank you so much for checking it out, Kaci! I’m also overjoyed to hear that you liked my narration as well. 😁
It was fabulous! 😀
😭😭😭
The way goosebumps have taken up permanent residence on my skin! This was SUCH an amazing ending!!
I love these characters and this world so much, it felt so real!
I'm in awe of your skill!
Thank you so much, Mina! I really loved everything about this story. I’m so glad you enjoyed it. 😁
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 MAN you DELIVERED!!! I'M AT AWE!! I LOVED IT.. IT ALL FELT SO LIVED IN... THE CHARACTERS, NOAH AND PAVEL WERE SO ALIVE IN MY MIND. AND THANK YOU FOR DOING THE SOUND-OVER IT BROUGHT IT ALL TO LIFE!!!AND OOHH THE CRYING FOR PAVEL!! SUPERB ACTING!! IM AT AWE!!
Haha, this may very well be the best comment I've ever received. I am so, so, so glad you enjoyed it! I really felt like it was something special when I finished recording. I myself was tearing up by the end. 😅
Thank you so much for the support as always!
Thank you so much! I’m really glad you enjoyed the finale and the narration! Yeah, with Noah I tried to leave a few hints in part two, but the first one that comes to mind is the part where he gets seasick and the captain says “I didn’t know you folks could get sick,” since the captain would have known he was a robot (Anduvian as Pavel calls him.)
Thank you again for the support and wonderful feedback as always!
Thank you so much for the amazing feedback and the incredible support. I super appreciate you, and I will keep writing for sure. 😁🙏