Love this, and I absolutely chose the wrong choice at first too. The conflict resolves a little too quick in the Path of Compassion, but given the constraints of the prompt and challenge, it was very well-done!
Thanks Hazel! I agree, the conflict could have used more friction, but I was watching the word count tick upward and sweating the whole time, haha. Great feedback as always, thank you for taking the time to check it out!
Of course. Having to abide by a word count limit definitely sounds stressful. It's kind of how I feel trying to make ten syllable lines work in a poem haha
I knew I chose the wrong choice but I'm still sad about it lol
"I'm told ours is the best planet" 😂😂😂 I see you
I love this story! I love that we kind of chose the same sort of avenue to take our stories down 🥰
Haha, yeah I knew I wanted a distinctly "good" and "bad ending," haha. That bad one was tough, though, I agree. Thanks for checking it out!
Love this, and I absolutely chose the wrong choice at first too. The conflict resolves a little too quick in the Path of Compassion, but given the constraints of the prompt and challenge, it was very well-done!
Thanks Hazel! I agree, the conflict could have used more friction, but I was watching the word count tick upward and sweating the whole time, haha. Great feedback as always, thank you for taking the time to check it out!
Of course. Having to abide by a word count limit definitely sounds stressful. It's kind of how I feel trying to make ten syllable lines work in a poem haha
Love the choose your own adventure ending. Fantastic writing. This prompt had my butterflies in full on spiral.
absolutely incredible! you told me to pick the other ending, and i did, but i wanted the sad one first and DAMN that was SAD lol
i love the way you write your cyoa's, they're always so well written and the endings are always perfect.
and i LOVE the track you've paired with this one, ILLENIUM slaps and the vibes fit perfectly
Spectacular adventure…and I always enjoy a musical pairing.