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Molly's avatar

This was an entertaining read and listen! Thanks for sharing. Your writing is evocative. I enjoyed the doctor asking if he'd like to know exact day and hour of his death, but I wonder if hour and minute would be more appropriate? I thought the story might end before we got to the killing but we completely followed through, it was a horrifying delight.

Looking forward to the next one!

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Tara Deacon's avatar

Thank you for bringing my imagination’s worst way to die to life! After listening to your narration, I’m probably going to have nightmares for a week seriously.

Thanks alot!! 🤣😂🤣 I'm going to have to sleep with a light on tonight!

Jokes aside, this was incredibly well written. I read it myself first and thought I was fine… until I listened to the audio. That’s when it really scared the daylights out of me!

The killer being a taxi driver and a doctor and a painter? Such a freaky combination! And setting it in a hospital made it even more disturbing. I already hate hospitals LOL

The way you write makes everything come alive I felt like I was right there, watching it all unfold like some creepy voyeur.

Also, amazing job with the sound effects. They added so much to the atmosphere. Really, really well done! It definitely set the mood

And that murderer? Chilling. The red glowing eyes alone were enough to haunt me, but the fact that he paints with human blood to keep himself from aging?

That’s the stuff of nightmares. The image of him in that fedora, the shoulder length curls framing a face that shouldn't still look so young, is so vivid it’ll stick with me for a while.

The moment he kidnapped the detective and declared him his next muse? I actually got chills. It’s such a twisted blend of obsession, vanity, and horror.

He’s not just a killer he’s an artist of death, and that’s what makes him terrifying.

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