This was epically action packed! I like the nod to The Matrix, haha! The concept of a website is both eerie and brilliant and you executed it with nonstop intensity. The tension had me on edge and that ending? Absolutely perfect! I need more!
Haha, you’re the first person to catch that Matrix reference! I’m glad you liked it, it’s an idea I’ll probably come back to for sure. Possibly as a choose your own adventure. 👀
I do my best haha. It's a good nod! I would hope you would come back to this and definitely as a choose your own adventure! Even bigger nod to The Matrix! You can't pass this opportunity up!
Haha, thank you, Parker! I love writing flash fiction because it inspires ideas I can return to later. Could you imagine this concept as a full-blown choose-your-own-adventure?
This was epically action packed! I like the nod to The Matrix, haha! The concept of a website is both eerie and brilliant and you executed it with nonstop intensity. The tension had me on edge and that ending? Absolutely perfect! I need more!
Haha, you’re the first person to catch that Matrix reference! I’m glad you liked it, it’s an idea I’ll probably come back to for sure. Possibly as a choose your own adventure. 👀
I do my best haha. It's a good nod! I would hope you would come back to this and definitely as a choose your own adventure! Even bigger nod to The Matrix! You can't pass this opportunity up!
Masterful job of making me think Mr. Smith is an ass hat, but then also making me root for him
Haha, thank you, Boo! I knew I wanted him to be the kind of protagonist you love to hate but also secretly root for. Complex characters for the win!
Ummmm this is an action movie & I'm hiding behind a pillow before the next scene! Omg
Haha, it would make for a pretty good action movie! 🍿
Seriously. I see Jason Statham as the lead....
WOW this is so action packed! The timing is perfectly done and the entire premise blew my mind! Well done!
Thank you! I got the idea a few hours ago and I was dying to write it, haha.
That's one hell of a game. Awesome tale.
Haha, thank you, Parker! I love writing flash fiction because it inspires ideas I can return to later. Could you imagine this concept as a full-blown choose-your-own-adventure?
I definitely could. It is fun to play with so many different concepts. It also broadens our horizons as writers. Very cool.