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The Verdant Butterfly's avatar

“The debt for love isn’t collected at birth. It is exacted when one returns to the Earth.” That final line is devastating in its truth and perfectly placed. Your ability to weave sorrow, myth, and moral reckoning into tight, lyrical stanzas is lovely. This reads like a ritual in verse, timeless, haunting, and beautifully constructed.

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Caley Robison's avatar

This is so awesome! It's funny, I went straight to the prompt and wrote my own story before I read what you wrote and its funny how similar they are! Great minds think alike hahaha. Excellent job!

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