Thank you! When I first wrote this piece, I was inspired by someone (I forget who) saying that your home is a reflection of your mind. As soon as I heard that, I started working on this piece. Thanks for checking it out!
Thank you, V! This one was interesting because I also decided to structure each stanza with a decreasing number of words per line. I felt like it added to the impact. Glad you enjoyed it!
I agree. This poem is really effective at creating the sense of emptiness and desolation left behind. I really liked it. Thank you.
The home reflects your mind,
What shall you find?
Empty spaces filled,
Memories killed.
I love how this has captured emotional desolation, setting up the rest of the poem
Thank you! When I first wrote this piece, I was inspired by someone (I forget who) saying that your home is a reflection of your mind. As soon as I heard that, I started working on this piece. Thanks for checking it out!
Hmm.
Could be. My closet's organized, anyway. The rest of it needs work.
Not sure if that signifies anything.
"I live inside these bones,
Hollow secrets, hushed tones,
A living ghost,"
Wow. What a haunting image. Another incredible piece from Bradley.
Thank you, V! This one was interesting because I also decided to structure each stanza with a decreasing number of words per line. I felt like it added to the impact. Glad you enjoyed it!