A Short Horror Story for 30 Days of Fright: Day 9
WHOA you have seriously outdone yourself with the voiceover! Not only that, but the story was insanely interesting as well!
Hehe. Charles was so callous. The two men die and he says well that was a waste of time and tries to leave. What a jerk. Haha. It made the ending very satisfying. Thank you for sharing.
Haha, thank you for checking it out! Charles absolutely had that one coming. Karma's a thing in my horror universe for sure. 😆
Brilliant! This is simply brilliant!
Thank you so much, Maryellen! I’m really happy with how this one turned out. I especially had a lot of fun with the narration.
Great work, Bradley. Love it!
Thank you! I got the idea almost immediately when I read the prompt, haha.
What a fun and spooky story! Great characterisation and a simple story with a good scare!
Thank you for checking it out, Arpita! I really appreciate this awesome feedback as well. 😁
WHOA you have seriously outdone yourself with the voiceover! Not only that, but the story was insanely interesting as well!
Hehe. Charles was so callous. The two men die and he says well that was a waste of time and tries to leave. What a jerk. Haha. It made the ending very satisfying. Thank you for sharing.
Haha, thank you for checking it out! Charles absolutely had that one coming. Karma's a thing in my horror universe for sure. 😆
Brilliant! This is simply brilliant!
Thank you so much, Maryellen! I’m really happy with how this one turned out. I especially had a lot of fun with the narration.
Great work, Bradley. Love it!
Thank you! I got the idea almost immediately when I read the prompt, haha.
What a fun and spooky story! Great characterisation and a simple story with a good scare!
Thank you for checking it out, Arpita! I really appreciate this awesome feedback as well. 😁