Thank you so much for checking it out! I’m really glad folks are enjoying this piece, it was sort of a spur of the moment story I did between bouts of fighting with my internet this week, haha.
My heart was pounding. My heart was breaking from the moment you created a world fit to be a part of cinema with well rounded characters who had everything going against them and yet they made the effort to connect before the end.
Thank you so much for this amazing comment! I really wanted to zoom in on the moment here, despite the chaos going on all around them. I myself tend to disassociate when I’m in shock, so I wanted to capture that as well here.
Apologies for the tragic story on a Monday, haha. I’m so glad you liked it, though! I was listening to the musical pairing earlier and the idea sort of leapt into my mind.
Love how this wasn't confined to war. The love of the narrator for the dying soldier. Exceptional, Bradley!
Thank you so much for checking it out! I’m really glad folks are enjoying this piece, it was sort of a spur of the moment story I did between bouts of fighting with my internet this week, haha.
Like a movement played by scientists, and becomes a great sentence that envelops this writing
It's not just a moment, it's a world!
Thanks for checking it out, Boo! I agree, the world here became quite compelling as it went on. I may have to revisit this one.
My heart was pounding. My heart was breaking from the moment you created a world fit to be a part of cinema with well rounded characters who had everything going against them and yet they made the effort to connect before the end.
Thank you so much for this amazing comment! I really wanted to zoom in on the moment here, despite the chaos going on all around them. I myself tend to disassociate when I’m in shock, so I wanted to capture that as well here.
Really appreciate you checking it out!
Beautiful little meditation on death and time. Love the incidental world building too.
Thank you! Yeah, the idea came to me earlier today and I thought it would be a good fit for this particular prompt.
Thank you so much for checking it out!
Oh my goodness 😭😭
Why are you making me cry on a Monday?
This is absolutely gorgeous 😭
Apologies for the tragic story on a Monday, haha. I’m so glad you liked it, though! I was listening to the musical pairing earlier and the idea sort of leapt into my mind.
It was really fantastic 😭