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Rachel Tribble's avatar

This is amazing! So good!

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Thank you, Rachel!

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Annieguile Bentulan's avatar

That ending was so good!! Chef's kiss. Loved this overall!

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Thank you! I always love it when bad guys get what they deserve, so in this case, it felt right for Rachel to take matters into her own hands.

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Annieguile Bentulan's avatar

Agreed! And that's one of the things that was so well done. It didn't feel force at all. Just a natural satisfying conclusion.

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Mina Howell's avatar

WHAT this is AMAZING

You are the absolute master at micro fiction (and everything else 😅)!

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Haha, thank you! It was a really fun challenge.

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Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

Gotta love Karma! 🙌

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Stories Sown With Hope's avatar

Fascinating! A story told only in dialog. Who knew it could be done so well. :)

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