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[ 2D ]'s avatar

So, uh... when does the game actually come out?

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Haha, it does sound like a cool game, to be fair.

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[ 2D ]'s avatar

P.S. I love the creative-mixed-media approach--rather inspiring, actually!

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Thank you! I’ve used this format a couple times, and while it’s a lot of extra work, I feel like it adds immersion to the story. Thank you so much for checking it out!

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[ 2D ]'s avatar

I honored it. When I saw the newspaper, I stopped in my tracks. It pulled me out of the narrative for a momen--not in a bad way, but because I thought, “Bradley really went all in!” Not to mention the audio. [ BOOM! ] Just fantastic. I loved it!

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

I really appreciate it! If you get a chance, check out an old story of mine called "Chaos Theory." It was featured on Top of Fiction a while back and it was the first time I used the meta-article concept.

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Saint-Lazare's avatar

Gripping, and I love the comment section, it gives a nice touch of dark comedy!

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Thank you! Yeah, I wanted to add some humor and video game references in the comments via their user names, haha.

Thanks for checking it out! 😁

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Saint-Lazare's avatar

My pleasure!

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Mina Howell's avatar

What in the hell!? This is amazing!

Pardon my language - but goodness, I am SO invested in this!

And the newspaper clipping?! I love that it mentions D'Veen too 😂

New favorite alert!

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Language is both pardoned and welcome (in case you didn’t notice my penchant for F-bombs in my writing lol).

I’m so glad you enjoyed it and that you caught the D’veen easter egg!

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