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I get a Lovecraftian vibe and I dig it!

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Yes! This story is set in my horror mythos that is 100% inspired by Lovecraftian fiction, so I'm really glad it gave off that vibe!

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Hahaha so zesty! This was amazing the attention to detail on the different creatures and forms is *chefs kiss*!

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Thank you! I was trying to figure out the best way to showcase how wide and varied these old gods are in my horror universe, so I'm glad that came through in the final story!

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It showed up so well!

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So, 1st fingerling potatoes and now zesty lemon cake. Perhaps you need a companion cook book with your stories? 😉 such a fantastic pace to this one....

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Haha, you're right! Food does seem to be a reoccurring theme lately. A companion cookbook sounds awesome! I'm going to make that a thing one day!

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Seriously, I think you should. It would be a hit, with some pun and play on words?

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So zesty 😂😂

This story was amazing!

I really loved how you described their movements and form in quick succession, I could feel the timing of the action and it was fantastic!

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Thank you Mina! I always worry about my prose being too heavy during action scenes, so this feedback is amazing to see! 😁

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